4 lines of my life

"Some confusions never ends , some people never change , some words you can't explain , this world is always going to be same"

That's i wrote a long time ago still confuse about it .

So suggest me to re-write it and give any suggestion for any line.

I would be greatful.

Thanks

Nice, you also do writing. I'm never wrote or thought anything so no idea what or how i can suggest you something

Well I think those are great lines mate and why you are so confused because they are good and no need to be changed

Thanks to both of you for the comments. I was just thinking if someone give me better lines then i could make it more better that's why i asked for suggestions.

luakhan said:

Nice, you also do writing. I'm never wrote or thought anything so no idea what or how i can suggest you something

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armarasrar1 said:

Well I think those are great lines mate and why you are so confused because they are good and no need to be changed

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