So recently within the past few months I have really gotten into free styling and trying to rap and make songs.
I feel that I am decent at it, here's one I wrote the other day.
It's just your standard "I'm the best" type rap.
Feedback would be much appreciated.
Brandon Tanner, here with the beasty flow/
Yall niggas think you can steal my show?/
Ha ha, I laugh cause it's funny/
It doesn't matter cause after I'm leavin' with your honey/
I don't make money, no I don't have stacks/
You can call me Hugh Heff, cause I'm always feelin' racks/
I drank to much, got liquor in my stomach/
Restin' on the top and I will never plummet/
Like what you hear? Stay and have a listen/
Diss me again, and you'll end up missin'/
You best back off, you're getting a little pushy/
Fuck all the haters, at least I'm gettin' pussy/
I'm the King, and I will never move/
You know I got the swag that puts the ladies in the mood/
I'm smoking mad weed, and blowin' angry smoke/
I'd let you take a hit, but you'd probably choke/
I stay high, like Wiz Khalifa/
My bitches show up, and I pass 'em the reefer/
Give it a couple minutes, then they're off to Mars/
Don't hang with celebrities, but I'm chillin' with the stars/
While I'm braggin', fuck that nigga Drake/
He used to be decent, now he's your typical fake/
Who cares if he's got money and bitches/
I'm just as good, where are all my riches?/
Oh yeah, let's not forget about Rick Ross "The Boss"/
Niggas too big, not one that I could toss/
I'm sorry dude, I'll pay for your order/
Nevermind... I only have a quarter/
Okay, now it's time to get serious/
How come Tyler The Creator is so mysterious?/
Ah fuck it, he's not worth my time/
I'll just do his girlfriend, and cover her with my slime/
I feel that I am decent at it, here's one I wrote the other day.
It's just your standard "I'm the best" type rap.
Feedback would be much appreciated.
Brandon Tanner, here with the beasty flow/
Yall niggas think you can steal my show?/
Ha ha, I laugh cause it's funny/
It doesn't matter cause after I'm leavin' with your honey/
I don't make money, no I don't have stacks/
You can call me Hugh Heff, cause I'm always feelin' racks/
I drank to much, got liquor in my stomach/
Restin' on the top and I will never plummet/
Like what you hear? Stay and have a listen/
Diss me again, and you'll end up missin'/
You best back off, you're getting a little pushy/
Fuck all the haters, at least I'm gettin' pussy/
I'm the King, and I will never move/
You know I got the swag that puts the ladies in the mood/
I'm smoking mad weed, and blowin' angry smoke/
I'd let you take a hit, but you'd probably choke/
I stay high, like Wiz Khalifa/
My bitches show up, and I pass 'em the reefer/
Give it a couple minutes, then they're off to Mars/
Don't hang with celebrities, but I'm chillin' with the stars/
While I'm braggin', fuck that nigga Drake/
He used to be decent, now he's your typical fake/
Who cares if he's got money and bitches/
I'm just as good, where are all my riches?/
Oh yeah, let's not forget about Rick Ross "The Boss"/
Niggas too big, not one that I could toss/
I'm sorry dude, I'll pay for your order/
Nevermind... I only have a quarter/
Okay, now it's time to get serious/
How come Tyler The Creator is so mysterious?/
Ah fuck it, he's not worth my time/
I'll just do his girlfriend, and cover her with my slime/