Another Rapping C4d

[Apexis]

I really don't like the text on this one I made.

 

[Awesome]

What is with the C4D? xD Anyway, the text needs work, and the light effect at the bottom right could be erased. Also, the C4D just doesn't match up with the rest and looks placed on. It's a funny concept though. :3

 

[Apexis]

What is with the C4D? xD Anyway, the text needs work, and the light effect at the bottom right could be erased. Also, the C4D just doesn't match up with the rest and looks placed on. It's a funny concept though. :3

I tryed to make it rap around here so it looked like she was trapped. The text is hidious I know.

 

[oHvHo]

agreed with your comment about the text, although i cannot see anything going with this really, the font seems nice and so does the color but there is something wrong =/

 

[ABC_mybb_import19773]

I agree, the text needs to be changed, but you have a real talent for what you do!

 

[Manatee]

i didn't even know what the hell it was at first..

 

[Blaze_mybb_import19635]

It Needs some work but i can see that you already put some work into it.. but my perspective is it looks copy and pasted, sorry. but your getting good.
~Blaze.