Burning heart.

[n0f4m3]

Burning heart.
by ~ExtraLov3

Engulfing flame takes your soul, Your foul words take their toll, A silent wish to have me dead, To fill my body full of lead. A parting kiss as you lay me down, A simple word, a mournful frown. You whisper to me, "There was no we". The silence fell, it got it's way, that fateful night, that week in May.

 

[_vili]

I didn't like the end, but the beginnign is awesome

 

[n0f4m3]

Wow that was just delightful this is about a breakup correct?

Mhmm ):

 

[popular101]

good and nice rhymes there

 

[n0f4m3]

Lol yeah the end is HORRIBLE, I was up at 3am so That's my excuse lol ;D

 

[spamx33]

Wow, that was a really sad poem, but really detailed and written really well. Brilliant job

 

[Vipul]

Nice rhyme at the end.