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Burning heart.

n0f4m3

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Burning heart.
by ~ExtraLov3

Engulfing flame takes your soul, Your foul words take their toll, A silent wish to have me dead, To fill my body full of lead. A parting kiss as you lay me down, A simple word, a mournful frown. You whisper to me, "There was no we". The silence fell, it got it's way, that fateful night, that week in May.
 

_vili

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I didn't like the end, but the beginnign is awesome
 

spamx33

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Wow, that was a really sad poem, but really detailed and written really well. Brilliant job
 

Vipul

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Nice rhyme at the end.