I like it, there's a little more going on in it, unlike others which I like. I'm undecided on the smoke on the side though, I feel like there could be something more fitting in its place. Only other thing I'd say is more color, I like colorful. Lol other than that it's really good work IMO man.
Thank you Hope, and thank you chad for the feed back I couldn't think of any thing to put in place of the smoke and I wanted to do a white and black one I have never had a successful one haha! thanks for the feed back guys!