From black to white

[_vili]

This poem is just something extremely weird, and it came out looking like this, because my only goal was rhyme not message of the poem.

Spoiler

It was silence, which killed my heart.
It was murder, which took my mom.
It was money, which made me poor.
It was burglar, who stole my shoes.

But then came joy, which made me smile.
And then came momma, she called me Kyle.
And then left fear, I came brave again.
And single thought, I shall remain.

 

[n0f4m3]

I like the format of it =O

 

[Zeroifrit]

Good rimes , and if you made it did you used your real name?
Because some Kyle was mentioned.

 

[_vili]

I didn't use y real name in the poem, it just rhymed.
But I use my real name in my nick, thought.

 

[CrossFires]

It was silence, which killed my heart.
It was murder, which took my mom.
It was money, which made me poor.
It was burglar, who stole my shoes.

yeah it a bit weird for me to xD But pretty good

 

[Alta La-Ahad]

The song is good,good job waith fore more

 

[CrossFires]

That was a song? Can sing it

 

[_vili]

lol.. no, it isn't song. I got no idea how altair thought it is, just a basic rhyming poem..

 

[Alta La-Ahad]

sorry my bad,but its cool and i like it

 

[popular101]

thats weired..haha..but thankz for sharing

 

[Gravedigga]

why would u waste ur time sharing a piece of shit