Honest Opinion on My Promo Vid Please Guys

[Effexion]

Hi,

I made this yesterday using Camtasia, I was quite high so this will explain a lot of my errors, but I would love an opinion.

http://www.screencast.com/t/qUvp7jRfy

Many thank yous,

~Effex

 

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