How's my first Pking video?

[sheymyster]

Hey guys, myself and my brother have twin ags pker's and we finally got our first video out. We have had them for quite awhile but with school and learning how to edit in Sony Vegas, took awhile to get something together I'd be ok posting on the internet. Hope you like it, it's alot of older content I know, we have already begun recording new material and it should be in our next video very soon, hope you enjoy!

PS: Please if you have the time leave any constructive criticism you want, we can only improve if we have some feedback from our viewers, good or bad. I appreciate it all, thanks!

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uRQXKSXE_ok[/youtube]

 

[Wale_mybb_import14682]

Starting to watch this right now; Will edit this post once I finish.

Edit: The video was pretty good. I would say the intro was very long, change that. Maybe add different songs before they end. Like I got bored with the eminem at the beginning . You did own though. I stopped at 6:15 though.

 

[Tyler-]

No one likes edge videos anymore.

 

[Crysis]

I found it quite boring, wasn't fast paced.

 

[sheymyster]

Thanks for the comments guys. Sorry you didn't find it exciting enough, but that's why I ask for good and bad feedback, I will try to make the next one more presentable. We had to use a lot of older content to set up as more of an introduction for our twins since we've been around for awhile but never released a video due to time constraints or video editing knowledge. We have steam necks now and hope to have a maul soon as well as a ring of vigor, so the next vid should have chaotics, karosi/claw combos with the vigor, and a lot more multi pking as with new wilde that's all we do. Hope I didn't lose any viewers with this first attempt, thanks again for the feedback guys, it helps us improve!

 

[EAF]

I liked it, I have many questions, like what are your stats?

 

[Pink Floyd]

The editing seems nice. The only piece of critique I have for you;

I see a lot of people these days pretending to be other famous people or implying they are related somehow. Ie; "the original AGS twins"

 

[sheymyster]

Thanks for the replies guys, to answer the first question, our stats now are as follows, (they weren't quite this high in alot of the video content )

99 strength, 99 magic, 99 range, 99 constitution, 10 defense (for korasi), 78 attack (soon to be 80 for chaotics), and our summoning is different right now, my twin is ahead of me a bit with 80s summoning, im in the 60s but we've both been barraging lobs alot for charms so that will hopefully be 99 summoning soon. Also, our dungeoneering is above 70 already, got stream necks and rings of vigour now and working on chaotic maul and then rapier.

As for the critique from Pink Floyd (great name btw), We put that on there because when we made our names we've since then had some other people copy our style with using the L's and I's and 1's even to try to reproduce our name. There are many other "PURE's" out there with similar names made to look 3D like ours, but we say original because we came up with the idea and we're the first. as proof, my name is all L's and my twins is all L's except for a single I behind the P. One of our dopplegangers (copies) has released a video of him pking, and he used the spelling of our names in his tags to get more views, so that is probably one of the main reasons we added that into the intro to state we are the original Pure twins.

 

[EAF]

Thanks for the replies guys, to answer the first question, our stats now are as follows, (they weren't quite this high in alot of the video content )

99 strength, 99 magic, 99 range, 99 constitution, 10 defense (for korasi), 78 attack (soon to be 80 for chaotics), and our summoning is different right now, my twin is ahead of me a bit with 80s summoning, im in the 60s but we've both been barraging lobs alot for charms so that will hopefully be 99 summoning soon. Also, our dungeoneering is above 70 already, got stream necks and rings of vigour now and working on chaotic maul and then rapier.

As for the critique from Pink Floyd (great name btw), We put that on there because when we made our names we've since then had some other people copy our style with using the L's and I's and 1's even to try to reproduce our name. There are many other "PURE's" out there with similar names made to look 3D like ours, but we say original because we came up with the idea and we're the first. as proof, my name is all L's and my twins is all L's except for a single I behind the P. One of our dopplegangers (copies) has released a video of him pking, and he used the spelling of our names in his tags to get more views, so that is probably one of the main reasons we added that into the intro to state we are the original Pure twins.

How long before you got your account's to the state they are in now?
How long did it take?
Also, you should make a thread in the Achievement section, and post your stats ect, I can help with the format of the thread.

 

[sheymyster]

Thank you so much for the help man, I would love to make an achievement thread if you get time and don't mind helping me format it correctly, I just finished the karosi quest last night actually and I should have a chaotic maul by the end of the week. And mine and my brother accounts are about 2 years in the making. there old accounts that we made awhile back but the maxxed pures idea started about 1 and a half or 2 years ago tho.