Listen to what I made today

[Ellen]

I'm in very early stages of learning with production, and I was messing about today and came up with this. Opinions please?

https://soundcloud.com/their

 

[Joint]

To be honest, I didn't really like it. But its better then mine when I tried aha

Edit: Listened to it for a second time and it got better lol you must be a magician or something man!

 

[Ellen]

To be honest, I didn't really like it. But its better then mine when I tried aha

Thanks for being honest. I don't like it either, but I just wanted opinions.