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So while I was away I started dabbling in the arts of rapping amongest other things


To sum it up just tell me what you think. There's only one song

Be brutally honest cause I don't like dick riders.

Also before you go experience I just want to tell you these things ahead of time which is
1. This Freestyle was made within 30-45 minutes editing and all
2. My lyrics are from some of my first ever written (being like 1-2 years old)
3. I'm the second verse
4. This was not intended to be something great I just wanted to put something on a track for this exact reason.

https://soundcloud.com/keshxwn

Lastly If you like it and happen to have an account show some love

So tell me what you think.
 
Beginning reminds me of Chris Travis, It was lit, the last 30 seconds of the song went alright aswell.
 
@Ambien Wasn't really my intention but I listen to the whole crew so thats cool. Thanks for stating your opinion

@Toxic Even for it to be a rough start alot of people tell me the same so thanks
 
bruh, you from Tulsa???? I'm from Broken Arrow G. yo hmu!

Sorry for the off topic post but your part in the song is cold.
 
Flat said:
bruh, you from Tulsa???? I'm from Broken Arrow G. yo hmu!

Sorry for the off topic post but your part in the song is cold.
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Small world! But yeah bruh that's where I'm from but I go to college in Kansas so I'm only down there for breaks and music. I'll PM you tho

Also thanks.
 
Ace said:
Small world! But yeah bruh that's where I'm from but I go to college in Kansas so I'm only down there for breaks and music. I'll PM you tho

Also thanks.
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Dang dude, that's tight! lol hmu when you get back in town.
 
Flat said:
Dang dude, that's tight! lol hmu when you get back in town.
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Smh you got time to post but not to FaceTime me
OT: that was really good man.
 
Rare said:
Smh you got time to post but not to FaceTime me
OT: that was really good man.
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Thanks man

Watch out now @Flat you better Facetime my dude lol
 
The whole track is good but I think your flow is dead, just my opinion but nice bars bro
 
@Liquids it's about time someone had something to say

lol I was kinda getting tired of the it's cool replies because imo it's not that great

But if you could explain in more detail that would be great.
 
Ace said:
@Liquids it's about time someone had something to say

lol I was kinda getting tired of the it's cool replies because imo it's not that great

But if you could explain in more detail that would be great.
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Spit the same verse on the same beat and don't sound as sloppy, spit that verse faster and hopefully you can hear the difference

And change your tone of voice bruh
 
Liquids said:
Spit the same verse on the same beat and don't sound as sloppy, spit that verse faster and hopefully you can hear the difference

And change your tone of voice bruh
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All Understandable but I didn't really try on this track so I won't be doing that 

This is just a sample of my lyrically ability and will be deleted once I release a more serious song

But I suppose your opinion would stim from the style you like it's purposefully meant to be slow and mono-tone.

It's most definitely sloppy I can agree, but once again effort level was low.

I can speed up my flow anytime I feel it's necessary.
 
Yeah man, can't wait to hear the new track : GL and keep doing your thing
 
@Liquids and @Sedate

I'll try not to disappoint on this next release.

Thank's for the honest feedback.
 
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