Love

[Buddy_mybb_import10515]

Love
Whatever you need,
Is what I will be,
Whatever you see,
Shall be part of me.

I will go to the end,
Of the earth and sea,
Wherever you need me,
Is where I will be.

They say love is blind,
But how can that be,
Even in my dreams,
It is you that I see.

-Road Kamelot

Thoughts? Corrections?
(Sorry if it's not that good. I was kind of rushing. =/ )

 

[Techno]

Wow. I can't write a poem for shiet.

 

[Touche]

You're really talented, good job.

 

[Buddy_mybb_import10515]

Thanks for the feedback.
I wrote it because school starts for me today, and I couldn't fall asleep.

I thought being on the computer would help me get sleepy. =/
Now my eyes hurt.

 

[Techno]

It's amazing let me use it for my school :O

 

[Buddy_mybb_import10515]

I'll let you use it if you can beat me at single battle on shang.

 

[Techno]

Deal i need oty get to canada first.

 

[Touche]

That was nice of him to let you use it.