My first ever "Anime" drawing.

Stoned

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Alright guys, this is my first ever "Anime" drawing that I really took serious lol but please rate it and tell me what you thing, and what I need to improve on, Thanks

 

777

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i like it but work a little bit on the shape of it, it looks disfigured but hell wtf do i know my handwriting and drawings are fucking awful.
 

Stoned

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6ix said:
i like it but work a little bit on the shape of it, it looks disfigured but hell wtf do i know my handwriting and drawings are fucking awful.

lol, thanks, ill try to work on it a little bit, but what part of the body do you think is disfigured?
 

Person

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Nice drawing, it needs to more realistic too.
 

Sabotage

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Fed said:
Nice drawing, it needs to more realistic too.

It's good if you weren't going only for realism.
I honestly think it was pretty good though.
I don't see how it was disfigured at all...
 

Tsunami

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I started drawing anime when i was around the age of 13 and know im 18 and the person who helped me out a lot on most of my downfalls was a dude on youtube named Mark Crilley. If your really trying to get into drawing anime definitly check him out he'll help you out a lot.
 

Pacino

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Pretty good but a she seems like a child without the boobs. You should maybe make the face just a bit thiner, no blush and it'll do. But anyway it's great
 

Stoned

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Thanks dude idk why you are -25
 

Cicero

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It's pretty good, although it looks more like a regular cartoon rather than anime.
 

deprimes

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You have some talent my friend
 

Madara Uchiha

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The body is pretty well done, besides the one of the arms being bigger than the other. The head on the other hand isn't that great. I would focus more on the hair and the face in the future.
 

Dextral

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Shape of the face. I love it though! Haha! Cool stuff! Keep improving dude