My first poem in a bit

[Craig]

Okay guys so I've recently decided to get back into poetry, it's been I wanna say at least a year and a half since I've attempted to write. So this may not be the greatest thing you've read, so anyway without further delay here is my poem.

You stupid fucking slut I hope you die, to say I don't miss you would sure be a lie, oh how I cried and I cried but to no surprise, you gave up and left me for some other guy, one I called friend the one I called homie, you broke the bro code now your ass truly owes me, not just a little not just a lot, I will not stop till I'm out on top, she won't regret it at least not right now, but trust me one day I'll bet she comes round, wants to be friends, says that she's lonely, well to bad slut you must not know me, you've jaded my thoughts, played games with my brain, had me in love then left the next day, now there's someone new, who I love and adore, she's way better than you, or so I've been told, actually I found out on that bed on the floor, now please get away, and leave me alone, go fuck one of my friends from next door.

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Also guys I would love any feedback you give, I can take criticism just also give me pointers on how to progress in this. Don't flame you will be reported instantly

 

[Fed]

A few other posts by you are telling me you really dislike your ex. This poem has a very angry tone to it.

 

[Taco Bell]

I read this in my head in a Morgan Freeman voice.
I also read it in my head as 2 chainz.

In the morgan freeman voice, it was a good poem and seems like this girl caused you alot of hard times.
In the 2 chainz voice, it was very fast and intense. Sounded like a cheap date with hooker.