I think this is my best poem for now, and I really like it myself.
It tells a story, how metal music makes the weak people feel fear and they can't survive from the problems of life.
My Guitar
String of my guitar, a vibrating tone.
It's warming my mind, and running trough soul.
Few godlike riffs, and hell of a chords,
make me feel tempting, and wanting just more.
I turn the amp on distortion, and the metallic sound,
Digs up the deepest feelings, and rage is all on.
I can feel the fear of others, and demonic sound,
of this dooms day like solo, of my own guitar.
It tells a story, how metal music makes the weak people feel fear and they can't survive from the problems of life.
My Guitar
String of my guitar, a vibrating tone.
It's warming my mind, and running trough soul.
Few godlike riffs, and hell of a chords,
make me feel tempting, and wanting just more.
I turn the amp on distortion, and the metallic sound,
Digs up the deepest feelings, and rage is all on.
I can feel the fear of others, and demonic sound,
of this dooms day like solo, of my own guitar.