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Apexis

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It is ok, buy the second one is hard to see. and whats up with the lines?
 

Monstar

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Can you post a picture of the layers so we can get a better understanding of exactly what you actually did?
 

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Monstar said:
Can you post a picture of the layers so we can get a better understanding of exactly what you actually did?


Monstar, please tell me how looking at my layers panel will help you evaluate my tag whenever you can't see any of the layers.
 
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Can't say I really like it, looks too, I don't know. The coloring gets on my nerves
 

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Vanquish said:
Strong post bro.

The orange glare is distracting and too over the top.
The grunge look is not handles well.
The image in the background should be obscure, but not to the point where it just looks like you covered it with a color.
The square in the top left is also distracting.
The green is too sparse to make a difference, and it just looks out of place.

Strong argument bro.
 

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Thanks for the critique.
 
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Orange and blue should only be used in contrast to add details to one specific thing. Not everything.

I've a headache now.
 

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Infamous said:
Orange and blue should only be used in contrast to add details to one specific thing. Not everything.

I've a headache now.

Mission accomplished.

V2.
 

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Infamous said:
Orange and blue should only be used in contrast to add details to one specific thing. Not everything.

I've a headache now.

The reasons you dislike it should have nothing to do with the color choices.
It's called style, lrn2art.
 

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Vanquish said:
Monstar, please tell me how looking at my layers panel will help you evaluate my tag whenever you can't see any of the layers.

I meant to say the original render, sorry.
 

Apexis

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Hmm yet if you posted this on gfxf you would get nice reviews. They don't no graphics
 

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Domcon said:
Hmm yet if you posted this on gfxf you would get nice reviews. They don't no graphics

Actually, every comment that I recieved on gfxf about me gundam tag are positive feedback, take a look:


RedEyes said:
cool style! Liking the colors a lot, but maybe use a slightly darker tone of pink in the background and i would say that the render needs just a bit more contrast to stand out. Very nice tag overall :angel:

brgb said:
sh*t! this is the style thats kills me... remenids me of ROAR and Ralph and other great GFXers

Strick said:
Man, I'm loving the colors in this. But like RedEyes said, add some more contrast to the render to make him stick out more. For some reason I feel like the yellow bar on the right sticks out to much and doesn't look very good, but that's just me.

Taine said:
DAT TEXT!!!1!
This is a good style for you Van! You should work at it. I think (Like others have said) make the focal (Render) stand out more. Also I don't think you shouldn't of included the yellow border style.
Kiu!

+la.geepee said:
this style looks so familiar do i know you??

 

Buddy_mybb_import10515

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I didn't see you post a second version. I think it looks far better than the first. Things seem to really flow. I know the style looked kind of grungy and disconnected while connected, but I think the tag came out great.