Pretty nice advertisement for my "server"

Gogetaa

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looking good man! nice K0 too ;D
 

ImSoPro

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Could you link it instead? My mobile does not load anything. :/
 

ImSoPro

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Thanks Gogeta.

I have watched the video and this is indeed an advertisement. It's nice and it COULD have been better if you used an intro and some effects.

I am willing to do this for you, but you will need to get me "the gameplay". Not sure if I'll do this free. =p
 

AuuxL

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Its a decent trailer but could be improved so much.
Take a look at this trailer : http://www. youtube.com/watch?v=jLcupVIknio then look back to yours. Also http://www. youtube.com/watch?v=KkP9jeB-VaM (Remove spaces after .)

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Showcase whats different about your servers ( web client, custom items, duel-arena ANYTHING and focus of them for a while)
Sync music with the video / text, draws the reader
Make a intro for your trailer
Showcase your website, it looks pretty good
Basically copy what the successful private servers have done in their videos, also at the end put a link IN the video to your website
 

Gogetaa

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AuuxL said:
Its a decent trailer but could be improved so much.
Take a look at this trailer : http://www. youtube.com/watch?v=jLcupVIknio then look back to yours. Also http://www. youtube.com/watch?v=KkP9jeB-VaM (Remove spaces after .)

Improvements
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Showcase whats different about your servers ( web client, custom items, duel-arena ANYTHING and focus of them for a while)
Sync music with the video / text, draws the reader
Make a intro for your trailer
Showcase your website, it looks pretty good
Basically copy what the successful private servers have done in their videos, also at the end put a link IN the video to your website

i'm loving this guys content!
 
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