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[Xinz]

Tell me what you think?

 

[J4mmy]

Looks like you put few lightning dots here and there, added few C4D's and put some text onto the render. 5/10.

 

[Xinz]

Looks like you put few lightning dots here and there, added few C4D's and put some text onto the render. 5/10.

And what should I do better then?.. What do you mean.. And I have also Smudges it.

 

[J4mmy]

Looks like you put few lightning dots here and there, added few C4D's and put some text onto the render. 5/10.

And what should I do better then?.. What do you mean.. And I have also Smudges it.

Well, that was just my opinion and the beauty is in viewers eyes and I just didn't find your piece of art appealing to my eye. But if you ask me about improvements then you could do the following:

• Try to make the colors flow with each other better (Use shades of same color instead of many different colors)
• Use borders (1px black or white)
• Make your focus points (Render) more visible which means bring it to the front and maybe smudge some parts of it to make it fit into the picture
• Atleast take out the top C4D (Blackish one) or put it on overlay, maybe erase some parts of it or so

Can't think of anything more.

 

[bcfcAnt]

I'm sorry xinz but I don't really like this one from you,

I feel that there is no flow and the colours are off, also the c4d's used look out of place, especially the one on the right hand side.

You are improving on text I see

But yeah, keep working at it!

 

[J‌‌‌_mybb_import10332]

To be honest i suggest you take out the 2 C4D's in the corners they are not needed

 

[Xinz]

Thanks for your suggestions. Well.. I will try do it better.