• Welcome to ForumKorner!
    Join today and become a part of the community.

Signature

J4mmy

Member
Joined
Nov 6, 2011
Posts
483
Reacts
0
Reputation
0
Credits
0
Looks like you put few lightning dots here and there, added few C4D's and put some text onto the render. 5/10.
 

Xinz

Member
Joined
Aug 7, 2011
Posts
178
Reacts
0
Reputation
0
Credits
0
J4mmy said:
Looks like you put few lightning dots here and there, added few C4D's and put some text onto the render. 5/10.
Click to expand...

And what should I do better then?.. What do you mean.. And I have also Smudges it.
 

J4mmy

Member
Joined
Nov 6, 2011
Posts
483
Reacts
0
Reputation
0
Credits
0

Well, that was just my opinion and the beauty is in viewers eyes and I just didn't find your piece of art appealing to my eye. But if you ask me about improvements then you could do the following:
  • Try to make the colors flow with each other better (Use shades of same color instead of many different colors)
  • Use borders (1px black or white)
  • Make your focus points (Render) more visible which means bring it to the front and maybe smudge some parts of it to make it fit into the picture
  • Atleast take out the top C4D (Blackish one) or put it on overlay, maybe erase some parts of it or so

Can't think of anything more.
 

bcfcAnt

Onyx user!
Joined
Oct 19, 2011
Posts
230
Reacts
0
Reputation
0
Credits
0
I'm sorry xinz but I don't really like this one from you,

I feel that there is no flow and the colours are off, also the c4d's used look out of place, especially the one on the right hand side.

You are improving on text I see

But yeah, keep working at it!
 

Xinz

Member
Joined
Aug 7, 2011
Posts
178
Reacts
0
Reputation
0
Credits
0
Thanks for your suggestions. Well.. I will try do it better.
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Menu
Log in
Register