Tag a Day - By: Graphics

[Graphics]

Decided to see myself progress. I'll try making at least one tag a day. Rate and critique my work.

If you are interested, I do have a shop as well.

Anyways.


9/12/2012:

9/15/2012:

9/16/2012:

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[Pug]

Really no flow whatsoever, I find myself looking at the left side where that gap is more than the right side. You should really work on putting colors together, and take those black lines off.

 

[Ohm]

I think you should change the white in the left, my eye goes to it, not to the guy.

 

[Graphics]

Alright. Thanks. Kind of rusty. Took a month break or so. I also tried something completely out of my element. Which was black&White. I didn't like the white on the left like you guys said, but I was in a bit of a rush to get it done as it was like 90 degrees in my house and I was just really uncomfortable. Thanks for the feedback, nonetheless.

 

[Ohm]

You could just add another render in maybe?>

 

[GENIUS]

What beach is pretty much right, doesn't really flow

 

[Graphics]

You could just add another render in maybe?>

Not changing anything. This is a progress thread to help improve myself everyday.

I think two renders would throw off the balance extremely. Not a bad idea, just not something I'll consider doing.

 

[Graphics]

Just finished a tag, check it out!

 

[Pug]

Today's is just really plane and blank, it doesn't look like you really did anything prominent.

 

[Graphics]

New tag up there! Check it!

 

[Pug]

Best one so far, just work on the way the colors go together.

 

[Graphics]

Thanks!!! Trying to improve.