Really no flow whatsoever, I find myself looking at the left side where that gap is more than the right side. You should really work on putting colors together, and take those black lines off.
Alright. Thanks. Kind of rusty. Took a month break or so. I also tried something completely out of my element. Which was black&White. I didn't like the white on the left like you guys said, but I was in a bit of a rush to get it done as it was like 90 degrees in my house and I was just really uncomfortable. Thanks for the feedback, nonetheless.