No.
The signature seems stretched.
The lighting is very bad.
The lines you drew aren't blended into the signature at all.
The text is off, remember the rule of thirds.
No.
The signature seems stretched.
The lighting is very bad.
The lines you drew aren't blended into the signature at all.
The text is off, remember the rule of thirds.
Those colorful squiggly lines look too fake and throw off the focal way too much.
The text makes another focal because of bad placement.
It could also use a border.