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Vanquish

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No.
The signature seems stretched.
The lighting is very bad.
The lines you drew aren't blended into the signature at all.
The text is off, remember the rule of thirds.
 

Shannon

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Seems stretched and squiggly line around the person doesn't look good.
 

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Stretched, and that just ruins the picture. Otherwise, it's good.
 

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Echoes said:
No.
The signature seems stretched.
The lighting is very bad.
The lines you drew aren't blended into the signature at all.
The text is off, remember the rule of thirds.
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The render is not blended.
The flow is bad.
It seems like you placed a render on a background, greyscaled it, and used pent tools.

2/10
 

Cybr_mybb_import10633

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Those colorful squiggly lines look too fake and throw off the focal way too much.
The text makes another focal because of bad placement.
It could also use a border.
 

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Hi Heavenly!

I love the effects you used, however I dislike that the effects seem a little low quality.

All in all it's a nice signature, and you should continue posting your work!
 
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