Words

Words

The words that we hear,
Are forever sound,
Provoking our dreams,
Onward bound.

They float through the air,
The music of life,
Without them we'd stray,
Lost to our strife.

Marked by our hope,
Spread by our dreams,
Forever they travel,
Between you and me.

-Road Kamelot

Comments? Corrections?

Wow, that's really good. Nice job.

Great post, I liked it, you should write more.

Thanks.
I wrote a few and posted them here and on SF, and people said I should write more.
So, I'm trying to get better.