I find this piece to be boring. No.. more than that.
I believe that this piece is a minor edit that just... barely, if you will, scratches the surface of what I would consider a good edit. The colors are hardly changed, and it seems not much effort was put into the piece at all. I think you should work on the changes a little bit more and make the colors pop. There isn't much to grab the eye, and even if it is for personal use, it does not seem to have the appeal that some other images hold. The point of showing of something in a "gallery" is to garner attention towards your skill, or just to show something that would never have any use anyway. I believe that you can do so... so much more to make this a great thing.
- Provenance
PS: PM me if you want to work this out.